Showing posts with label Bailey. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Bailey. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

What I Would do with a Million Dollars


Wow! Today I’m going to tell you how I would spend $1,000,000. First[j1]  of all, I would move to the relaxing island of Hawaii.
The first reason I would move to Hawaii is because I would be able to swim every day and be able to snorkel! I would work at a hotel in Hawaii and earn a lot of money to buy a dolphin to swim with me when I snorkel so I would have a buddy to give me company when I see the sharks.  I would name my dolphin Sparky!! Second of all, I would buy a mansion.[j2]  I could make my room so gigantic that it would be the size of my classroom! I could put a library in my mansion! Then, I would never need to return a library book ever again! The shelves would be filled with my favorite chapter books[j3] like dork diaries, and boxcar children[j4] . I could even make a special spot for my horses,[j5]  in the house! Best of all, I would be famous for having the biggest house in the United States!! Probably. Now you know how I would spend 1,000,000J

 [j1]You are missing a period before First.
 [j2]Period after mansion
 [j3]like give an example of your favorite chapter book.
 [j4]Dork Diaries, and Boxcar Children

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Thursday, January 17, 2013

letter for 13 colonies

Dear Gentleman, My name is Philip Ludman I am the governor of the most amazing colony of North Carolina. I would love to have you join us in the most outstanding new world. If you’re thinking about being a farmer North Carolina will be wonderful for you. You should help us build plantations! We can make a deal and you can get lots of land to build plantations! We can grow wonderful fruits and vegetables like, squash, corn, potatoes, onions, rhubarb, lettuce, apples, peaches, and pears. When you come you should help us take care of the animals at the animal farms. Come help us trade as well. You can be the hero of the colony and help us build mills around the streams to ground up food for the colony! Building mills are easy and you would love the job! Go talk to my friend James Huffly to borrow a ship to North Carolina! Gather your friends and family and tell about coming and helping us in North Carolina! I hope this letter find you well! Sincerely, Philip Ludman