Wednesday, February 20, 2013

What I Would do with a Million Dollars


Wow! Today I’m going to tell you how I would spend $1,000,000. First[j1]  of all, I would move to the relaxing island of Hawaii.
The first reason I would move to Hawaii is because I would be able to swim every day and be able to snorkel! I would work at a hotel in Hawaii and earn a lot of money to buy a dolphin to swim with me when I snorkel so I would have a buddy to give me company when I see the sharks.  I would name my dolphin Sparky!! Second of all, I would buy a mansion.[j2]  I could make my room so gigantic that it would be the size of my classroom! I could put a library in my mansion! Then, I would never need to return a library book ever again! The shelves would be filled with my favorite chapter books[j3] like dork diaries, and boxcar children[j4] . I could even make a special spot for my horses,[j5]  in the house! Best of all, I would be famous for having the biggest house in the United States!! Probably. Now you know how I would spend 1,000,000J

 [j1]You are missing a period before First.
 [j2]Period after mansion
 [j3]like give an example of your favorite chapter book.
 [j4]Dork Diaries, and Boxcar Children

 [j5]delete

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