How I Would Spend 1,000,000

Today I’m going to tell you about three things I’d spend $1,000,000 on. First I’m going to tell you about a jetpack. I’d spend money on a jet pack so I could fly.  Every morning I would strap on my jetpack and go flying out the Door to school. Next I’m going tell you about an amazing pool[t1]  that I someday will build. I’d build a pool so I could cool off .I would also like t[t2] o just practice swimming and I’d have a pool party everyday[t3] . Last I would like a horse[t4] . My friend  Bailey has a horse and I thought if I had one like her we could  ride them and go places[t5] .  like Douglas Creek[t6] . We would go as fast as we can go riding through the wheat fields. It[t7] [t8]  would be lots of fun.  Having  my own pet would be a blast to. Now you know what I’d spend $1,000,000 on.

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 [t1]maybe instead of a pool.. How about Next I’m going to tell you about the magical pool I will build.

 [t2]Don’t start a  sentence with and

 [t3]period

 [t4]like horse? Or like a horse

 [t5]Need a period.

 [t6]Period and It needs to be capitalized. By the way what is It? Riding along the rushing creek would be lots of fun. Much more interesting then it…

 [t7]Like????? We could ride them all over the place like down Douglas Creek.

 [t8]Instead of it describe what it is. For example'Riding on our gallant steads we could explore the rushing, tumbling water of Douglas Creek. See the difference. You can see it!