If I had a 1,000,000

If I had $1,000,000[t1]  the stuff in this piece of writing is what would spend it on[t2] . The first thing I would spend my money on is to be in the army. I know it sounds weird to say I would spend my money on being in the army but I would spend my money on a plane ticket. I will make new weapons for them, I already have the design and it will be called “The KILLER”. [t3]  I would buy a really tough tank and put the KILLER on it[t4] [t5] [t6] would be indestructible because the killer is on the tank.[t7] [t8] What would I do with the tank you ask[t9] ? I will drive it on city streets .I will help the army and shoot the killer and the place the 1,000 exploseve rockets lands [t10] will be a grave yard. I would shoot a machine gun with the permission of the army. My signature gun is the m60 machine gun. Once I am[t11]  done with my duty I[t12]  would buy my tank that I invented and I would bring it home awesome.  

The next thing that I would spend it on is a SMART HOUSE! A smart house is like a slave. A SMART HOUSE is so AWESOME and it has these keys that you talk into and it does what you say and it does what you say exactly. It’s like a robot because A SMART HOUSE has no feelings[t13] . After you buy a smart house, I can’t explain it just the life! The first thing the house  would do for me is pay my bills[t14] for a car

Now you know how I would spend $1,000,000 on. I would spend $1,000,000 on much more things but that is all I can fit in this piece of writing.

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 [t1]This is on the wrong side ..Should be $1,000,000

 [t2]This does not make sense

 [t3]Get rid of When...Just have I would buy a really tough

 [t4]You could put the word "It" here but it is boring. How about, This massive piece of iron would be indestrucatble blah blah

 [t5]Insetad of saying on it say where you will mount the gun. For example.....I would buy a really tough tank and weld the Killer onto the side of it.

 [t6]Need to finish thought

 [t7]period

 [t8]Capital

 [t9]I like the idea of a question here. It should sound like this... "What would I do with a tank you ask?"

 [t10]what is it....Is it a bullet, or, this deadly shell, or the earth shaking shell explodes

 [t11]This is not correct

 [t12]You need something like. Once I finish my duty in the army I would .................

 [t13]For example...............Tell one thing you would have your house do for you....

 [t14]This paragraph is almost done. Can you change a few of the "Its".. What is it.. Use the examples in the pervious paragraph to help you...